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Tomb Raider: Sanctuary of The Fallen Angels
#1
Posted 30 December 2008 - 10:55 PM
Blurb of my new fanfiction:
'Lara travels to the summit of Mount Everest and discovers the long lost 'Sanctuary of The Fallen Angels' hidden deep within a glacier. Legend fortells that it contains the two gateways to Heaven and Hell. Before she knows it, Lara is battling against shrieking angel statues , the legendary angel Gabrielle who can render a person blind, deaf and dumb with a move of her hands, and must defeat a familiar face of the past in a game that could send Lara to hell... literally. Will Lara manage to emerge victorious, or will this be her final adventure?'
'Lara travels to the summit of Mount Everest and discovers the long lost 'Sanctuary of The Fallen Angels' hidden deep within a glacier. Legend fortells that it contains the two gateways to Heaven and Hell. Before she knows it, Lara is battling against shrieking angel statues , the legendary angel Gabrielle who can render a person blind, deaf and dumb with a move of her hands, and must defeat a familiar face of the past in a game that could send Lara to hell... literally. Will Lara manage to emerge victorious, or will this be her final adventure?'
#2
Posted 31 December 2008 - 12:24 AM
Uh-oh. This is gonna push my story off a cliff (in a good way). I can't wait! First that awesome game, (Tomb Raider: Christmas) now this! W-O-W!
One tomb raider is good, two, better. -Tomb Raider Movie
Natla Rules. Period-me
Lara is cool!-me
READ.MAXIMUM.RIDE.NOW.I.MEAN.IT. (gets angry)
2+3=RUBIK'S CUBE!-thecomputernerd01
Natla Rules. Period-me
Lara is cool!-me
READ.MAXIMUM.RIDE.NOW.I.MEAN.IT. (gets angry)
2+3=RUBIK'S CUBE!-thecomputernerd01
#3
Posted 04 January 2009 - 10:57 PM
I'm in the process of the first chapter. Lara is scaling down a glacier the size of the eiffel tower and her rope snaps!
P.S I'm looking for people to proof-read. Leave a comment on my page if you'r einterested.
P.S I'm looking for people to proof-read. Leave a comment on my page if you'r einterested.
#6
Posted 05 December 2009 - 07:23 PM
QUOTE (TwilightLover13 @ Dec 5 2009, 06:07 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think people forgot about this. 
Actually, I'm still in the process of writing it. About 54% so far!
#8
Posted 15 December 2009 - 05:42 AM
QUOTE (Mystery-King @ Dec 5 2009, 07:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Actually, I'm still in the process of writing it. About 54% so far! 
Good, expect yours.
#10
Posted 10 May 2010 - 07:12 PM
Heres a preview of the first 380 words! Luckily it ended at a suitable part for a teaser so I'm happy. Sorry if it seems to wordy but I love to 'create a scene' Enjoy!
The landscape was dominated with an elaborate array of jagged peaks, treacherous crevices and perilous caverns. Endless snowflakes descended from the heavens above and danced gracefully along the light breeze before lying to rest on the rock-strewn mountainside. A figure, draped in a billowing brown cloak trekked through the mild snowstorm, surprisingly with ease, unlike the doomed that had ventured before her. She stopped for a moment and surveyed the scene, listening intently for an audible sound and gazing at the sight undisturbed by man for a considerable number of years. Her rosy lips parted and an imprisoned breath escaped, erupting in a series of intricate swirls and spirals.
“This is it.” She spoke softly to herself, “The Sanglyph has led me here but I see nothing.”
She knelt down, oblivious to the frostiness of the snow and took her backpack off and rummaged through the assortment of guns, medipacks and other supplies.
“It’s here somewhere…”She delved in deeper, straining her eyes for the sight she so wished to see, “Ah ha! Here we are.”
She grinned victoriously and pulled out what appeared to be a large golden disk, intricately decorated with several inked lines forming ornate patterns along with five glistening silver blades protruding out of it. Gathering up her belongings, she stood back up clumsily and stared at one of the blades, the only one encased in a mystical golden halo. The warmness of the glow calmed her inside and made her feel warm.
“Many people believed the Sanglyph’s translation meant ‘blood-stone’ in Latin but translated from ancient Himalayan tribal dialect it also means ‘Key of the Departed’.” She recited to herself. It was apparent that she knew exactly what she was talking about.
She lifted her arm, exposing it to the harsh elements and seized her cloak and dramatically pulled it off throwing it to the ground and revealing a young woman, clad in light brown shorts and a turquoise top with gun holsters strapped to both her thighs connected to a black leather belt with a shiny belt buckle. Her long brunette braid hung down, swaying and billowing in the wind. No normal being could possibly survive such an extreme condition in this attire, but she was no normal being. She was after all Lara Croft.
The landscape was dominated with an elaborate array of jagged peaks, treacherous crevices and perilous caverns. Endless snowflakes descended from the heavens above and danced gracefully along the light breeze before lying to rest on the rock-strewn mountainside. A figure, draped in a billowing brown cloak trekked through the mild snowstorm, surprisingly with ease, unlike the doomed that had ventured before her. She stopped for a moment and surveyed the scene, listening intently for an audible sound and gazing at the sight undisturbed by man for a considerable number of years. Her rosy lips parted and an imprisoned breath escaped, erupting in a series of intricate swirls and spirals.
“This is it.” She spoke softly to herself, “The Sanglyph has led me here but I see nothing.”
She knelt down, oblivious to the frostiness of the snow and took her backpack off and rummaged through the assortment of guns, medipacks and other supplies.
“It’s here somewhere…”She delved in deeper, straining her eyes for the sight she so wished to see, “Ah ha! Here we are.”
She grinned victoriously and pulled out what appeared to be a large golden disk, intricately decorated with several inked lines forming ornate patterns along with five glistening silver blades protruding out of it. Gathering up her belongings, she stood back up clumsily and stared at one of the blades, the only one encased in a mystical golden halo. The warmness of the glow calmed her inside and made her feel warm.
“Many people believed the Sanglyph’s translation meant ‘blood-stone’ in Latin but translated from ancient Himalayan tribal dialect it also means ‘Key of the Departed’.” She recited to herself. It was apparent that she knew exactly what she was talking about.
She lifted her arm, exposing it to the harsh elements and seized her cloak and dramatically pulled it off throwing it to the ground and revealing a young woman, clad in light brown shorts and a turquoise top with gun holsters strapped to both her thighs connected to a black leather belt with a shiny belt buckle. Her long brunette braid hung down, swaying and billowing in the wind. No normal being could possibly survive such an extreme condition in this attire, but she was no normal being. She was after all Lara Croft.
#11
Posted 17 July 2010 - 11:34 PM
OMG that's good. can you leave a comment on my fanfiction? ya know, telling me how it is? It's called Lori's Journal Part 2 or something. if you haven't already, read part 1 in the "your stories" topic. sorry i sound kinda desperate but i AM!
One tomb raider is good, two, better. -Tomb Raider Movie
Natla Rules. Period-me
Lara is cool!-me
READ.MAXIMUM.RIDE.NOW.I.MEAN.IT. (gets angry)
2+3=RUBIK'S CUBE!-thecomputernerd01
Natla Rules. Period-me
Lara is cool!-me
READ.MAXIMUM.RIDE.NOW.I.MEAN.IT. (gets angry)
2+3=RUBIK'S CUBE!-thecomputernerd01
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