This is going to be different from part one. This is in normal format, not journal format.
Here's the intro and the first sentance of ch. 1
Lori's Journal 2: My Real Name is Allori, and You're Gonna Hafta Deal With It, Even Though It's Strange.
Running is hard when you have to make your way through tunnels and dodge cameras. Especially if your name is Allori. Especially if you are the friend of Lara Croft. And when you are trapped in a security compound, when you don’t know how to get out, you lose hope. But not for Lori. She was fearless. Nothing could scare Allori Kristal McCoy. Until she was here. Running through the halls, looking for a way out. But when she happened upon the file room, she saw it. If she could just get the info she needed. After that, she shipped her notebook out, asking for help. She knew she could do it.
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“Eri, Charisse, I found these files a few days ago," I said, and walked over to them.
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Part 2 of Lori's Journal is here! No more cliffhanger.
#1
Posted 17 July 2010 - 12:16 AM
You know what they say about hope. It breeds eternal misery. ~Spencer Hastings
#2
Posted 17 July 2010 - 11:27 PM
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“Eri, Charisse, I found these files a few days ago, I said, and walked over to them. Charisse was rolled up into a ball, but Erica, the brave one, was standing. I gave Charisse hers first.
NAME: CHARISSE HARRINGTON
AGE: 18
HOME: LONDON, ENGLAND
NATIONALITY: ICELANDIC
PARENTS: DECEASED
ACADEMIC STATUS: GPA 4.0
REASONS; VERY SMART, COULD BE USED FOR OBJECTIVE. CAN CRACK AND CODE AND HACK INTO ANY COMPUTER. VERY USEFUL. OF COURSE, SHE MAY USE HER BRAIN FOR AN ESCAPE.
Then, Eri’s file.
NAME: ERICA MONTGOMERY
AGE: 27
HOME: LONDON, ENGLAND
NATIONALITY: AMERICAN
PARENTS: KRISTINA AND MICHAEL MONTGOMERY
ACADEMIC STATUS: GRADUATED MAGNA CUM LAUDE
REASONS; ATHLETIC, COULD BE USED IN COMBAT. VERY HARD TO CAPTURE.
And mine.
NAME: ALLORI (LORI) KRISTAL MCCOY
AGE: 16
HOME: LONDON, ENGLAND
NATIONALITY: BRITISH
PARENTS: UNKNOWN
ACADEMIC STATUS: HOMESCHOOLED, GRADES MOSTLY A AND B, ONE F IN LIFE.
REASONS; COULD BE USED IN COMBAT AND STRATEGIZING. LIKES DOING THINGS HEAD-ON, THOUGH. VERY HARD TO CONTAIN. HELPS LARA CROFT. OUR BEST ONE YET, POSSIBLY EVER.
Well, that was flattering. “Okay, guys,” I said, “let’s look at this one.” I held up the most interesting one.
SHEFFIELD
GLASGOW
LEEDS
BIRMINGHAM
LONDON
MEXICO CITY
NOTES: MOST PREVIOUS CAPTIVES DIED TRYING TO ESCAPE OR WHERE PROVEN NON-USEFUL. MEXICO CITY LISTED BECAUSE OF LARGE POPULATION.
“So they’re going through the top 5 largest cities in England backwards.” Said Charisse. “They’re saving the best for last, plus Mexico City.”
“Eri, Charisse, I found these files a few days ago, I said, and walked over to them. Charisse was rolled up into a ball, but Erica, the brave one, was standing. I gave Charisse hers first.
NAME: CHARISSE HARRINGTON
AGE: 18
HOME: LONDON, ENGLAND
NATIONALITY: ICELANDIC
PARENTS: DECEASED
ACADEMIC STATUS: GPA 4.0
REASONS; VERY SMART, COULD BE USED FOR OBJECTIVE. CAN CRACK AND CODE AND HACK INTO ANY COMPUTER. VERY USEFUL. OF COURSE, SHE MAY USE HER BRAIN FOR AN ESCAPE.
Then, Eri’s file.
NAME: ERICA MONTGOMERY
AGE: 27
HOME: LONDON, ENGLAND
NATIONALITY: AMERICAN
PARENTS: KRISTINA AND MICHAEL MONTGOMERY
ACADEMIC STATUS: GRADUATED MAGNA CUM LAUDE
REASONS; ATHLETIC, COULD BE USED IN COMBAT. VERY HARD TO CAPTURE.
And mine.
NAME: ALLORI (LORI) KRISTAL MCCOY
AGE: 16
HOME: LONDON, ENGLAND
NATIONALITY: BRITISH
PARENTS: UNKNOWN
ACADEMIC STATUS: HOMESCHOOLED, GRADES MOSTLY A AND B, ONE F IN LIFE.
REASONS; COULD BE USED IN COMBAT AND STRATEGIZING. LIKES DOING THINGS HEAD-ON, THOUGH. VERY HARD TO CONTAIN. HELPS LARA CROFT. OUR BEST ONE YET, POSSIBLY EVER.
Well, that was flattering. “Okay, guys,” I said, “let’s look at this one.” I held up the most interesting one.
GLASGOW
LEEDS
BIRMINGHAM
LONDON
MEXICO CITY
NOTES: MOST PREVIOUS CAPTIVES DIED TRYING TO ESCAPE OR WHERE PROVEN NON-USEFUL. MEXICO CITY LISTED BECAUSE OF LARGE POPULATION.
“So they’re going through the top 5 largest cities in England backwards.” Said Charisse. “They’re saving the best for last, plus Mexico City.”
You know what they say about hope. It breeds eternal misery. ~Spencer Hastings
#3
Posted 19 July 2010 - 10:15 PM

Erica (Eri) Allison Carrol

Charisse I really have no idea who this is.
Just imagine Lori as a tall, pretty, athletic girls with brown hair with red highlights and I'm being too descriptive. Oh, and she has brown eyes but likes to wear reddish-brown contacts.
People I think look the most like the characters.
You know what they say about hope. It breeds eternal misery. ~Spencer Hastings
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